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erasure poetry with Amiri Baraka and Ron DeSantis

erasure poetry with Amiri Baraka and Ron DeSantis

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The work in question.

Code lives here.

Reading about detournement this week has me thinking of this meme by Trevor Allen.

o, the Pelican. so smoothly doth he crest. a wind god!

If, for Debord, detournement is about creating new webs of meaning, and robbing existing signs of their own meaning, then erasure seems like a powerful method of reframing recognizable corpuses (corpi?). I'm especially interested in his point that a detournement is less effective the more it approaches a rational reply. Rather than trying to "embrace debate" or critique our political enemies directly, the goal is to render them absurd. This meme has stuck with me for half a decade because it does this so nicely - rendering the ugly beautiful through an act of erasure, finding the poetry in a shitty tweet by an awful guy.

I am really into the idea of a war on semiotics through acts of juxtaposition and synthesis. And  memes are probably the closest thing we have to a breakthrough practice of detournement - there's a reason Brad Troemel calls them the only  true art form of the 21st century.

Anyway, I thought I'd try my hand at my own version of Allen's meme: erasing a text I despise, leaving only the parts that reflect something beautiful. Trump's tweets are pretty played out, and I'm not much of a poet, so I made an "erasure generator" using the tweets of Ron DeSantis and the poems of Amiri Baraka. It parses each of DeSantis' tweets, leaving only the letters that correspond to a fragment one of Baraka's poems. This results in an ugly-beautiful archive.

I used this GitHub gist to pull deSantis' most recent 3000-some tweets, and pulled S O S, a collection of Baraka's poetry, from libgen.

This took a while to get right (lots of for loops), but I got some cool ASCII art out of my struggles:

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But, after sorting things out, I had a successful generator, replacing all letters that didn't correspond to a line of Baraka's poetry with spaces.

I decided to pipe it through tweet-image-generator for a more compelling visual presentation.

This kind of whips, but it's a bit much for proper consumption. I tried combining the output (basically waiting until the generated tweet had 240 characters and stripping whitespace) to increase legibility slightly, with some success.

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But, ultimately, this didn't feel like the aesthetic I was going for, so I met somewhere in the middle:

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I might think about ways to stay true to the spirit of what I'm trying to do while having a bit more content - for starters, a larger tweet archive or a more verbose target of my ire might help a lot. The biggest next step would just be curation - with 1/20th of the Baraka text, I generated almost 500 images, and sifting through them might result in some happy little accidents.